A few minutes ago their was a bird in the house it went everywhere we thought it was paralysed for a bit because it hit the other window so fast it fell in the table. We tried to lead it to the open window it was writ next to but it kept trying to get out that window. I found it when I went into the kitchen for a drink and it started nocking everything over so I screamed there were pill cases everywhere and also it did a poo and a live worm came out it took us about 10 minutes to get it out also did I menchion it was only me and my sister home, I was no help I screamed and was scared of it. After a will we started yelling at it to get out and waving a tea towl to gide it out wow that was so anoying now I have to clean up all the bottles and things it spilt
Hey KAte
ReplyDeleteYour story was really good it had great words in it and it made it sound fun.
Next you should reread over your writing to make sure it makes sense and the spelling is correct. But it was a awesome story. Well done