Tuesday 18 October 2016

writing

In writing today we have been reading and leaning about 'what happens when you sleep.  Miss power shared 3 links to different information for us to read. we discussed some of the key ideas and then started writing an explanation 

Here is some of my writing

There are 5 different stages of sleep. The first stage is where your muscles relax. Your body temperature gets cooler and your heart beats faster.
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4 comments:

  1. Tena Koe Kate
    I think that this is an interesting subject. you should share more on your blog. Why are you learning about this?
    Ka Pai (good work)
    From Jessie

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  2. Kia ora Kate its me Katelin. This is really interesting cause I did not no some of the staff you wrote about sleep Ka Pai (Good work) from Katelin.

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  3. Kia ora Kate it's Kaede here, This is some very interesting information about sleep. I didn't know any of that, Keep up the great work. From Kaede

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  4. Hi Kate,this is Serene from Waikowhai Primary. I really like the post about the 5 sleeping stages, but there was only 1 fact. anyways, I never knew the muscles relaxed when we sleep. visit my blog at http://wpsserenec.blogspot.co.nz
    blog ya later!

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