Weightlifting commonwealth games

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I was in the waiting room, my coach was writing down how much I was going to lift it was 179k. They call me out I go on the stage I go over to grip my hands with the white powder. I go up to the bar I hear the crowd cheering me on. I squatted down and put my hands on the cold bar. I pick it up but suddenly my left neay clicks and I drop the bar I am so angry with myself that I scream.

I have to go back to the waiting room. I am so angry, I go and practice with the bar in the waiting room. Then they call me out for my second attempt with that weight. My heart was pumping when I walked to the grey bar. I kept telling myself that I can do it in my head. I bent my legs and put my large hands on the bar. It fell’s wet because of the sweet I lift it up and I get it over my head but only for a split second and then I drop it.

I go back to the waiting room I know I am not going to lift the next weight but If I do I get gold. I practice until I am called out. When I get out on to the stage I have to go to the bar it is so nerve racking. I squatted down and I pick the bar up I am so focused and then I get it over my head and I hear over the the intercom “ Kate Bell has got gold” I drop the bar and run around screaming with happiness.

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Shadow

Shadow is about a boy that lived in afganistan and is telling his friends granddad what happent there. he is telling him in a detention center. The story is very sad and in one point he is in a box with 12 other people and there is not much air. I think the genre is realistic fiction because this is happening in some countries. My favourite character is shadow because she helps the boy get to a military bas so he is safe.


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This book is about a girl named Tracy Beaker she lives in a children home because her mum is to busy to look after her. Tracy wants to find her mum and there is a school play coming up and she is the lead so she asks her mum to come to it. But is she going to come. If I could be any character I would be Tracy because I am good at acting to. I think the genre is realistic fiction because this could happen to someone.



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The one and only Ivan

Ivan is a gorilla that lives in a circus. When he see's a new elephant named ruby arrive he want's to make shore she dose not end up like him.
My favorite character is Ruby because she is a beautiful elephant that is so kind and loving.
I think the genre is a bit of fantasy and realistic fiction.



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The commonwealth games

I think the Commonwealth games are games where you can enter in different sports and it is like the Olympics but not that intense .

Other facts I know are they have lots of sports like Shot Put, High Jump, discus and others. They do have  things like sprints. They also have long jump .There is netball, Basketball and gymnastic   The commonwealth games are going to be on soon. I think the commonwealth games are on every years it may not be correct. The commonwealth games are on this year at Glasgow. I think the commonwealth games are on this Thursday.

Twelve doors

Door number one had a big giant that had a bommyknocker in it’s hand it also  looked scary because it had a ferocious smile and it looked like it was about to hit me with it lukey I shut the door.

Door number two had in it a ,well I actually do not know what to call it,it looked like a lion that had 2 heads and the body was so big I thought it was going to eat or stomp on me.

Door number three had lots and lots of giant bees that were buzzing and they had sharp teeth that had poison in them like a snake. The bees had big stingers that had sharp tips.

Door number four had a big dragon that shot laser and breathed fire.

Door Number five had lots of zombies with swords

Door Number six had a hippo with a shotgun it was so scary

Door number seven had an ugly duck that had red eyes that was a devil

Door Number eight had a big big eagle that eats little girls as a snack

Door Number nine had a big dinosaur that had lots of guns and swords and other scary things

Door Number ten has lots of gorillas that had humans as there swords.

Door number eleven my dad naked

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EJ12 chock shock

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If I could be any character I would be Emma because who would not want to a spy a spy would be so cool to be. 

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