Monday 30 June 2014

Girl on a string


WALT: Show not tell

There is a figure up high she is hanging from something. At the end of what she is hanging on there is is a bright pink or red type of ball that is floating it is carrying it. It looks like a female because of her beautiful golden hair it’s glistening in the moonlight. I think it could be just about morning because of the morning frost. It seems like she is cold. My thought is how did she get there and why did she want to go there that is a mystery. The figure is floating above some mountains it looks like she is going towards something. She looks nervous but excited. There is a lot of fog and it looks great because the sunlight is just about to go over the mountains in the distance.




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