WALT: show not tell
There was a little figure it was roaming around the trees and it was feeling sad.The little figure was jumping on the leaves.The little figure looks like a robot. It was an aqua color but it was rusted it also had really big eye’s. The little robot has little eye brows like window wipers. It also has an orange top that looked like a big button. While the little robot was in the woods he saw some smoke coming out of the wide orange trees. He went closer and he saw a train and it had the same logo that was on him. He went and jumped on to the train and went inside he sat down and went to sleep. When he woke he heard the train stop so he jumped out of the train and he saw all these workmen. Then he saw a big place where he went inside. Inside there were lots and lots of doors and big contraption. There it was it was coming towards him it was one of the big contraptions. it scard him he went out of the bilding and found and old wrinkled leaf and it reminded him of home. That is why he went home and he saw a sun set that was as orange as an orange.
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