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Wednesday, 23 March 2016

Morocco


I feel the condensation on my fingers as I sip my fresh orange juice that I got just outside. To my left I see a snake charmer playing his flute and its snake slithering out of the basket. To my right I see lots of colorful dream catchers hanging outside a shop. I look down the long lane in front of me to see rows and rows of shops all aligned perfectly. People are everywhere running into shops and walking around. People on donkeys riding straight through the middle of the street without a care in the world. The smell of spices racing up my nose Cinnamon, Ginger and others I can’t make out.
I see lots of candles and incense burning inside the shops. Lots of shops are filled with different patterns and colors.

The Flying Fox

WALT: Write a descriptive piece of writing about our camp to curious cove

Wednesday, 10 June 2015

Myst Description

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Kate - The trees stand tall with the mist lingering around them. The rickety bridge lead to some little tree houses. The bridges have the green moss all over. All the birds are singing. Vines are hanging from the top of the large trees so it looks as if it has been abandoned for years.

Monday, 30 June 2014

The lone robot

WALT: show not tell

There was a little figure it was roaming around the trees and it was feeling sad.The little figure was jumping on the leaves.The little figure looks like a robot. It was an aqua color but it was rusted it also had really big eye’s. The little robot has little eye brows like window wipers. It also has an orange top that looked like a big button. While the little robot was in the woods he saw some smoke coming out of the wide orange trees. He went closer and he saw a train and it had the same logo that was on him. He went and jumped on to the train and went inside he sat down and went to sleep. When he woke he heard the train stop so he jumped out of the train and he saw all these workmen. Then he saw a big place where he went inside. Inside there were lots and lots of doors and big contraption. There it was it was coming towards him it was one of the big contraptions. it scard him he went out of the bilding and found and old wrinkled leaf and it reminded him of home. That is why he went home and he saw a sun set that was as orange as an orange.

Girl on a string


WALT: Show not tell

There is a figure up high she is hanging from something. At the end of what she is hanging on there is is a bright pink or red type of ball that is floating it is carrying it. It looks like a female because of her beautiful golden hair it’s glistening in the moonlight. I think it could be just about morning because of the morning frost. It seems like she is cold. My thought is how did she get there and why did she want to go there that is a mystery. The figure is floating above some mountains it looks like she is going towards something. She looks nervous but excited. There is a lot of fog and it looks great because the sunlight is just about to go over the mountains in the distance.