Post card

This week I finished one of my activities for topic/literacy it was a post card to a soldier.

Hey its mum.We  have been very worried about you because we haven't got a letter back in a while. We found our ration book, it was behind the desk. We were living on practically nothing for a week.  The ration does not seem like enough for all of us. I really regret having 12 babies. We made anzac biscuits this morning. They aren't like the biscuits we used to make but they will do.  We heard that they will last a while so we are going to make another batch soon with the things we had before the war. Some of the people down the street have been robbed. The robbers always take the ration book and the food they already had. (Maybe it’s us…) Hope everything is well over there. Just make sure you watch out ok?

Love mum

P.S I’m not entirely sure which son I’m sending it to and where you are.. I really shouldn’t have had 12 kids!

Morocco

I feel the condensation on my fingers as I sip my fresh orange juice that I got just outside. To my left I see a snake charmer playing his flute and its snake slithering out of the basket. To my right I see lots of colorful dream catchers hanging outside a shop. I look down the long lane in front of me to see rows and rows of shops all aligned perfectly. People are everywhere running into shops and walking around. People on donkeys riding straight through the middle of the street without a care in the world. The smell of spices racing up my nose Cinnamon, Ginger and others I can’t make out.

I see lots of candles and incense burning inside the shops. Lots of shops are filled with different patterns and colors.

The Flying Fox

WALT: Write a descriptive piece of writing about our camp to curious cove

Dog on the beach

This is my writing beware it is a bit loud

Winter wonderland - Fantasy

The story begins with me reading as usual with my torch under the cover of my soft warm bed. I was reading one of the best books in the world it was called Winter Wonderland. It was all about this mythical place where It snowed and snowed and snowed. Everything was covered in white. It seemed to be Christmas all the time. Everyone was eating candy canes and hot apple pie. It was a warm place everyone and everything was happy and jolly. I always read this book because it made me feel closer and closer to this wonderful world. While I was still reading I must have fallen asleep. I had a sick feeling and then I woke up well I thought I did but I didn't know, I had woken up in my bed but something felt weird. I went to the kitchen and on the way I heard bells ringing and the jolly sound of christmas songs being sung that was weird It was still august a long time until christmas.  When I walked into the room it was decorated with tinsel and there was the big tree out. Suddenly a delicious sensation went up my nose it was the smell of a just cooked hot pie. That was really odd mum never makes hot pie I don’t think she knows how to. I looked over at the window it had that mist on and it was snowing outside how was that possible it was supposed to be summer. Then a little girl walked by in her hat and gloves. She looked so familiar I thought I had seen her before the a thought struck me. She looked exactly like Elizabeth  from winter wonderland. Maybe I was in the story, but how was that possible. I went outside still in my puppy PJ I wish mum had gotten me the other ones in the story because these make me look like a baby. The wind hit me like lightning hitting the ground on a stormy night. I can hardly see through the thick powder. The little girl had vanished. I went inside but before I went in I sore the outside of the wooden house I notest that on the top it said in big gold letters wonderland hotel. I went searching but I had a funny feeling that I was waking up. I woke with a start I was really tired. I went back to sleep and I just forgot about the dream I new it was a good dream but I forgot.

The END

Myst Description

 

Kate - The trees stand tall with the mist lingering around them. The rickety bridge lead to some little tree houses. The bridges have the green moss all over. All the birds are singing. Vines are hanging from the top of the large trees so it looks as if it has been abandoned for years.

The fox and the girl

Monday 18th May 2015

I was wondering in the forest minding my own business when a little girl comes running out of the bushes at me. She was holding a feather in one hand and a knife in the other. Obviously I ran but I could not get away from her. I was beginning to  feel a bit worried. Maybe I won’t get home to mother and father or she might follow me and kill us all. I jumped over a bush but she stopped out of breath.

I kept running just in case she follows and then It began to snow.

In minutes the ground was covered in the thick powder I stop and stare. Then all of a sudden the girl comes rushing at me she catches my tail. I look straight into her powerful eyes she looks into my eyes too. She just lets go I don’t believe it she just let’s go of my tail. I sprint away to the white bushes I stare at her. She had not let go she had passed out.

I didn't know what to do I could not let her freeze but on the other hand she tried to kill me. In a split second I found myself wrapped around the little girl. It was so peaceful I must have dozed off.

When the sun rose the girl woke. I looked up at her she looked down at me. It was the first time she realized that we both want to go home. I raced off and hid behind a rock. Two humans walked around and then when they saw the girl they raced over to her. They all walk into the distance. What will ever happen to the girl will we ever meet again  

NSL: To use paragraphs

To find the video it is named the girl and the fox.

The world would be a better place if everyone was like me:

1. If everyone slept in their bed instead of in the lounge when we want to watch our fave show
2. If everyone went to a different room when they need to fart.
3. If everyone did not steal others food they bought.

Mysterious Machine

Marshmallows bare bones

WALT: Create a bare bones plan 

1. Boy at campfire cooking marshmallows
2. Something behind him 
3. Boy looks behind him nothing there 
4. Boy goes inside 
5. Mum tells him to go to bed 
6. Boy tells mum about the thing. Mum doesn't believe.
7. Boy asleep hears a noise 
8. Looks out window sees the thing 
9. The thing makes the boy obey him 
10. Boy goes with the thing into the forest
11. The boy finds out the thing is a dragon 
12. the dragon can talk to the boy 
13. The boys dad finds the boy and the dragon and tries to get the dragon
14. The boy tells the dad its OK and that the dragon is nice 
15. The dad dose not listen and boy has to show him that its nice 
16. dad under stands and lets the dragon go 
17. The dragon is now the pet of the man and boy 

Weightlifting commonwealth games

WALT

describe settings

Use more punctuation correctly

I was in the waiting room, my coach was writing down how much I was going to lift it was 179k. They call me out I go on the stage I go over to grip my hands with the white powder. I go up to the bar I hear the crowd cheering me on. I squatted down and put my hands on the cold bar. I pick it up but suddenly my left neay clicks and I drop the bar I am so angry with myself that I scream.

I have to go back to the waiting room. I am so angry, I go and practice with the bar in the waiting room. Then they call me out for my second attempt with that weight. My heart was pumping when I walked to the grey bar. I kept telling myself that I can do it in my head. I bent my legs and put my large hands on the bar. It fell’s wet because of the sweet I lift it up and I get it over my head but only for a split second and then I drop it.

I go back to the waiting room I know I am not going to lift the next weight but If I do I get gold. I practice until I am called out. When I get out on to the stage I have to go to the bar it is so nerve racking. I squatted down and I pick the bar up I am so focused and then I get it over my head and I hear over the the intercom “ Kate Bell has got gold” I drop the bar and run around screaming with happiness.

                                                        The End  

The lone robot

WALT: show not tell

There was a little figure it was roaming around the trees and it was feeling sad.The little figure was jumping on the leaves.The little figure looks like a robot. It was an aqua color but it was rusted it also had really big eye’s. The little robot has little eye brows like window wipers. It also has an orange top that looked like a big button. While the little robot was in the woods he saw some smoke coming out of the wide orange trees. He went closer and he saw a train and it had the same logo that was on him. He went and jumped on to the train and went inside he sat down and went to sleep. When he woke he heard the train stop so he jumped out of the train and he saw all these workmen. Then he saw a big place where he went inside. Inside there were lots and lots of doors and big contraption. There it was it was coming towards him it was one of the big contraptions. it scard him he went out of the bilding and found and old wrinkled leaf and it reminded him of home. That is why he went home and he saw a sun set that was as orange as an orange.

Girl on a string

WALT: Show not tell

There is a figure up high she is hanging from something. At the end of what she is hanging on there is is a bright pink or red type of ball that is floating it is carrying it. It looks like a female because of her beautiful golden hair it’s glistening in the moonlight. I think it could be just about morning because of the morning frost. It seems like she is cold. My thought is how did she get there and why did she want to go there that is a mystery. The figure is floating above some mountains it looks like she is going towards something. She looks nervous but excited. There is a lot of fog and it looks great because the sunlight is just about to go over the mountains in the distance.

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Bio poem

Kate

funny, crazzy

Daughter of Jenny and Murray

sister of Alice, James and patrick

I love reading, drawing and walking my dog

Fealings - mixed amoshan

Fears - spidders  snakes  bullsharks manicans and the dark

Bell